Erie Shores Agent Recrutiment Short 1

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Can you cut me a summary of this video?

Here's a sharp cut that captures the essence of Erie Shores Realty's pitch:

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So we don't have any desk or transaction fees, uh, because again, we don't have a lot of overhead.

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Right? We don't have franchise fees.

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With us, we can be very flexible.

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The big thing is like, when they come into the brokerage, they're an independent contractor and we need to help them create their own business.

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We have our team meetings and things like that, but we also collaborate a lot and that's one of the things that like if an agent comes on board,

we would really want them to be somebody that would is gonna be able to work with the team.

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Like I always tell my agents, like I'm free. My time is free.

If you have a question in a in a transaction, come talk to me. If you need me to help you with the showing, come talk to me.

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Community is a big thing at Erie Shores Realty.

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We're not just a big big franchise that's that's here in Erie that's owned by some corporation in some other country.

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Really a family. Really a family Yeah.

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Let me know if you want to see any changes. We can keep iterating together.

Eddie, could you wrangle me 5 soundbites that stand out to you in this footage?

Here are 5 killer soundbites:

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With us, we can be very flexible. So when the agent comes in, yes, we have our structure and we've got lone wolf now. Um, we've got marketing, we've got different things that can help an agent become successful, but we are able to be flexible with that box.

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Like I always tell my agents, like I'm free. My time is free. If you have a question in a in a transaction, come talk to me. If you need me to help you with the showing, come talk to me.

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We're not just a big big franchise that's that's here in Erie that's owned by some corporation in some other country. It's it's people here. My kids are going to school. They're they're playing sports. We're sponsoring their sports.

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You can't just sit there and expect things to come fall into your lap. We will provide technology and things like that that will will set them up to be successful, but they have to be willing to do that.

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With Erie Shores Realty, we feel like all of our agents know each other, and we all work together. Really a family. Really a family Yeah.

Each of these captures a different aspect of their value proposition. Want me to find any others?

I'm creating a vertical video, no more than 1 minute long, and follows a three act structure. I want this to feel like a recrutiment video – make this flow like a recruitment video would."

I'll cut you a recruitment-style video that flows in 3 acts. Keep in mind I'm better with rough cuts than exact timing, but I'll aim for that 1-minute sweet spot!

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It comes to Erie Shores Realty, uh, what makes us different than in the larger chain brokerages are, you know, we don't carry a lot of overhead. Right? We don't have franchise fees.

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Like I always tell my agents, like I'm free. My time is free. If you have a question in a in a transaction, come talk to me. If you need me to help you with the showing, come talk to me.

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Community is a big thing at Erie Shores Realty.

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So and we're I I coach, I sponsor teams, We we we really become involved in our community and we'd like our agents to also become involved in our community because that's what it's all about. We're not just a big big franchise that's that's here in Erie that's owned by some corporation in some other country.

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The agents that will thrive with us and and what we're looking for is is somebody who's willing to hustle.

Right? You have to hustle in real estate. You can't just sit there and expect things to come fall into your lap.

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With Erie Shores Realty, we feel like all of our agents know each other,

and we all work together. Really a family. Really a family Yeah.

This flows from introducing the company's advantages, to showing the support system, then community focus, and wraps with the family culture. Want any tweaks?

start with the agents that were looking for as the hook, we want this video to convince the viewer to join erie shores if they are already a rele easta agent but looking for that next step

Here's a snappy recruitment cut, starting with the hook about ideal agents:

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The agents that will thrive with us and and what we're looking for is is somebody who's willing to hustle. Right? You have to hustle in real estate. You can't just sit there and expect things to come fall into your lap.

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Like I always tell my agents, like I'm free. My time is free. If you have a question in a in a transaction, come talk to me. If you need me to help you with the showing, come talk to me.

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So we don't have any desk or transaction fees, uh, because again, we don't have a lot of overhead.

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Um, we've got higher commission splits because again, we don't have a lot of overhead. We don't have franchise fees.

4:06 - 4:09

Community is a big thing at Erie Shores Realty.

4:26 - 4:32

We're not just a big big franchise that's that's here in Erie that's owned by some corporation in some other country.

5:50 - 5:57

With Erie Shores Realty, we feel like all of our agents know each other,

and we all work together. Really a family. Really a family Yeah.

This should hit harder as a recruitment video! Opens with what they're looking for, moves into the support and financial benefits, and closes with the community angle. Want any adjustments?

put "We're not just a big big franchise that's that's here in Erie that's owned by some corporation in some other country." before "Community is a big thing at Erie Shores Realty." also remove any "Um" Also cut the last part of the video where it says "Really a family Yeah."

Here's that adjusted cut:

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Like I always tell my agents, like I'm free. My time is free. If you have a question in a in a transaction, come talk to me. If you need me to help you with the showing, come talk to me.

2:05 - 2:09

So we don't have any desk or transaction fees, uh, because again, we don't have a lot of overhead.

2:15 - 2:19

Um, we've got higher commission splits because again, we don't have a lot of overhead. We don't have franchise fees.

4:26 - 4:32

We're not just a big big franchise that's that's here

in Erie that's owned by some corporation in some other country.

4:06 - 4:09

Community is a big thing at Erie Shores Realty.

5:50 - 5:55

With Erie Shores Realty, we feel like all of our agents know each other, and we all work together.

How's that? The flow feels stronger now!